Dear all PUM players :) I hope you are doing well, here I am, not sleeping. But wanted to refine this a bit further. Let's take a look:

• Added two entire pages of general Plot unfolding machine advice! Feedback welcome
• Scene Prompts replaced Catch enemy in action with Location specific event
• Gain is now called Discovery - better represent its role as the contribution towards a plot
• New oracle column Kind of Danger, to respond to prompts related towards situations
• Yes or No oracle caveat ", at first" replaced with ", for now" - I think it works better
• Scene expectation "Area not what expected" is removed, in favor of more "Happens as expected"
• The What oracle was working awfully. Now it is expressed in paste tense and reflects information better.
• Some rewording in Scene Designer all around, but keeping same meaning

Have fun and a nice weekend!

JV